Love is a Weapon- Basic Plot

Due to our feedback, I have written a basic plot explaining the narrative for our opening scene. Footage wise, we don't have any extra shots in which we need to film however one of our main comments for feedback was that some people found the plot quite confusing to understand which is not what you want for an opening scene, by writing down the plot it will help me understand myself what the plot exactly is, so when it comes to editing I should be able to clearly see what I want the audience to understand.